BennyGo Shinigami
Posts : 6 Experience : 3 Join date : 2014-11-05
| Subject: Hakri Tempo (Done) Thu Nov 06, 2014 2:19 am | |
| Z A N A P A K U T O ▐♱ Zanpakutō Name ♱: Hakri Tempo ▐♱ Sealed Description ♱: It's pretty much a basic Zanpakuto no-dachi with a few custom made things. Hakri Tempo is 6 feet long, the width of Hakri Tempo is 1 inch. The handle of the blade is 2 feet, in total Hakri Tempo is 8 feet long. The handle is Ben's favorite color, white with a weird pattern. The sheathe of the blade is also white. It was given to him when he graduated the academy. The Zanpakuto is used for speed type characters, people who needs light weapons that won't slow them down. ▐♱ Release Phrase ♱: Pressure...Unleash Hakri Tempo!! ________________________________▐♱ Element/Affinity ♱: Wind ________________________________▐♱ Shikai Description ♱: Once Ben chants his release phrase, white and black aura spreads around him in a 5 feet radius. His Zanpakuto completely changes into a whole other . It is sometimes activated at will or it is combined with his personality disorder and is released when he turns into his dark side. His Zanpakuto expands in height and width. The width of it is 1 feet and the heigh is 11 feet long. The handle turns from white to black with weird demonic spikes. In the middle of the handle, is a face of a skeleton with horns. Weird symbols appears on his blade, Ben will later on figure out what it means. The blade curves in a the bottom and goes out the higher it gets. ▐♱ Shikai Ability ♱: Once his shikai is activated, he is able to control and manipulate wind. He can dense the wind to even cut through steel. With enough powers, ben can create hurricanes and tornadoes at 73MPH. A category 1 Hurricane reaches sustained winds of at least 74 mph (33 m/s; 64 kn; 119 km/h), and an f1 tornado reaches Wind speeds of 73 - 112 mph (33 - 50 meters per sec.). He mostly uses his wind to create air slashes. He is also able to shoot the wind in an upwards direction lifting up objects 200 lbs or less. ________________________________▐♱ Bankai Description ♱: ▐♱ Bankai Ability ♱: ________________________________▐♱ Techniques ♱:
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Yuri Aoi Captain
Posts : 137 Experience : 891 Join date : 2014-09-29
| Subject: Re: Hakri Tempo (Done) Thu Nov 06, 2014 3:39 am | |
| Your abilities need a few things. How strong are these said gravity balls, how big are they. You need sizes, strength, constraints. Gravity is a heavily restricted power if not banned so keep that in mind. I for one recommend not having a gravity based power. | |
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Rai-Oh
Posts : 11 Experience : 0 Join date : 2014-11-02
| Subject: Re: Hakri Tempo (Done) Thu Nov 06, 2014 3:44 am | |
| Alright firstly, That blade of yours wouldn't be a katana as a Katana in totality as far as feet goes is 5 feet. A no-dachi is more of a blade that you have here. I would like that to be specified. Secondly I wanna see a chart kinda as to how much power your gravity does vs low tier/semi-elite/elite/racial leaders. Pl0x | |
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Rai-Oh
Posts : 11 Experience : 0 Join date : 2014-11-02
| Subject: Re: Hakri Tempo (Done) Thu Nov 06, 2014 5:10 am | |
| Alright so for the being able to bend tornadoes and hurricanes You must up the amount of wind your zan puts out as an f1 tornado being the lowest and least strongest class of tornadow reaches Wind speeds of 73 - 112 mph (33 - 50 meters per sec.) and a category 1 Hurricane reaches sustained winds of at least 74 mph (33 m/s; 64 kn; 119 km/h). So fix that please. | |
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Rai-Oh
Posts : 11 Experience : 0 Join date : 2014-11-02
| Subject: Re: Hakri Tempo (Done) Thu Nov 06, 2014 5:44 am | |
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Nanatsu-O Captain
Posts : 239 Experience : 1051 Join date : 2014-08-25
| Subject: Re: Hakri Tempo (Done) Thu Nov 06, 2014 10:39 pm | |
| Two things.
1. Make sure that ability is translated into techniques please.
2. There is an update version to the template. Please add in the missing pieces to this app.
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