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Fu shinkō

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Birth Name: Brinno Bolgios
Shinigami Aliases:Fu shinkō
Gender:Male
Age: 178 years old, (looks 16)
Birth Date:????
Rank Status:Lieutenant

Affiliated Division:Rokubantai (6th Division)

Appearance:The top of Fu shinkō's hair is a bush of spikes, however his bangs frame over his face. Sharp edges of hit covers forehead with it's tips just right at his or nose and eyes passing just a few cementers. Fu shinkō's faced is scared across his nose. He wears a large black long sleeve shirt that hangs to his knees. He wear black pants and black boots. Over his pout fit he wears an blue vest with an red trail along the edges. The vest has a collar covering half of his neck. The collar is button together. His vest has the squad two symbol crest imprinted in the middle of it. He wears a brown belt which is where he keeps his pouch strapped to the right side of his back. He also haves two holsters strapped to both of his thighs. Fu shinkōi is considered very handsome. Looking into his eyes you can see the pain held deep inside. He often looks towards other people with hateful glares expect for his brother. Underneath his clothing Fu shinkō is slim but very fit. His muscles bugles out, and he's definition are cut deep into his six pack. In both of his ears are ear rings with the squad's two symbol's crest. He also wears two gloves on both of his hands.

A buff male with pale complexion with a wild and aggressive appearance, which fits his personality. He has a long face has high cheekbones, and thin eyebrow ridges. He has a thin scar running down the left side of his face. He is a lean-muscled young man due to years of training. Fu as the pagans worshiped the elements, and the tattoo on Fu's left chest is a tribal symbols for earth,wind,fire,and water. Additionally, he has the word "fight"(in the greek language) tattooed on his left cheek . He has seven piercings, a metal bar through each ear, three studs through the side of its upper nose, and two spike stud on each end of the bottom lip,he is also generally very handsome. Fu has a youthful, feminine visage and also a cross-shaped sword scar on his right cheek.His scar is long one running diagonally down his face from just below the outer corner of his left eye to just above his chin and a slightly shorter scar running diagonally across it in the other direction from just to the left of the bridge of his nose to his left jawbone. He wears a fanged bottom jaw which is positioned along his neck.Many people mistake him as an Arrancar for this. While his physique is usually barely hidden beneath his uniform, it seems he need only flex all his muscles at once to tear his garments to threads and leave him shirtless and bulging . His eyes are a dark shade of cobalt and has pale skin and black chin-length hair. His hair is spiky in the back with bangs that is covering a cloth wrapped around his forehead..There are many scars on his torso and back, the two most prominent being a pair of long, perpendicular scars on his chest.His entire body was covered by intricately wrapped dark grey bandages, with only his colored eyes and nose being visible, giving him an overall mummy-like appearance due to his age. While he normally wears the traditional Shinigami uniform in ragged condition ,with the sleeves rolled up to the shoulders . The uniform is tied with a white obi sash. He also wore white socks with normal sandals, and black, finger-less gloves,and a fur coat draped over himself. The coat consists of several Hollow masks adorned on it, which he utilizes in a variety of ways. The one resembling a dogs's skull which he wears over his face is the mask belonging to a hallow. Fu uses the rest to block Hollow attacks, and carries one of them like a shield during battles.He wears a straw hat (called a sakkat). He often wears a white kimono and hakama, armored boots, and a long flowing sash, with the latter two suggestive of Chinese influence.They also share similar breastplates, with a spiked rim, with the addition of Chinese vambraces and armored gauntlets, as well as layered spiked pauldron on each shoulder. He wears a parted pelt that extends from both shoulders and trails behind him as he walks with his sword attached to an obi sash.

Personality:
Fu lives as a Shimigami, portrayed him as a violent, bloodthirsty savage with no regard for life. He is also a believer in moral nihilism. His belief is there was no right or wrong, only survival, or death. He is calculating yet loyal and generally willing to absolve people that aggravate him, unless they have grievously crossed him.Being a calm and methodical individual, Fu is mostly in control of his emotions. He rarely loses his temper, but has shown a great capacity for violence when pushed. Fu is unconcerned about being viewed as "the bad guy" merely seeing his actions as a means to an end. He is often secretive and can be somewhat of a trickster, but is honest and direct. Fu is confident enough to not think he needs to prove himself.He can also be described as being sadistic, careless, paranoid, impulsive, emotional, short tempered, volatile, manipulative, jealous, obsessive and competitive. Vengeful and power-hungry, he will stop at nothing to achieve his ends and remove those who stand in his way. He will also place usefulness before pleasure and keeps people alive when it suits his needs.Fu rarely gets made a fool out of, also doesn't like to be made a fool out of either. He is rarely caught off guard, or by surprise, and is always two steps, ahead of his enemies, Fu is not as forgiving, he rarely forgives anyone. He is often disrespectful when talking to others.He is dark, foreboding, and has great confidence in all of his plans.He is also cold, pitiless and believes that everyone around him are nothing but tools to be used as part of his plans.His thirst for power seems to be the only thing more important to him . He occasionally speaks in an ancient Celt or Gaul language, denoting his origins.He believes all humans beneath him, not even worthy of his time or attention ,he treats them as playthings or slaves. He quickly resorts to petty taunts and insults against opponents he finds beneath him. When he finds himself on the losing end of such a battle, though, he becomes easily angered and unbalanced, as if shocked at the very idea of being bested.When it comes to fighting, Fu has a complex sense of honor; he regularly seeks to exact revenge for the cruel actions of his opponent. He often taunts and belittles his opponents when fighting, sometimes even attacking without warning. Fu has a strong desire to win his fights, but in a fair way, in what he views as a legitimate manner. He is also scornful of the idea of fealty or sacrificing one's life for others, believing only that the strong should survive and that the loss of one life can only be balanced by the loss of another.He is a calm, arrogant, delusional, dead-serious, aloof, stolid, melancholic, and detached man. He proclaim himself a "god of war." He is very deceptive and treacherous by nature ,he enjoys a challenging fight.He is also very fearless when it comes to battle.He is a peerless womanizer. As soon as he saw a beautiful woman, he wasted no time in pursuing her. No matter where he is, he takes pleasure in the company of a beautiful women. He often staged palm readings to meet women. And once, an entire town of women found themselves captivated by his palm-reading skills. He took pleasure in shameless flirting with women during his journeys, but not just any women. If a woman was old or unattractive, he has been known to run away from these types of women out of fear (especially when these particular women were infatuated with him).

When he was a child, Fu was very kind, loving towards his parents and younger brother and respectful to his fellow villagers as well as his teachers. However Fu never got attached to his peers. There was a distant between them all. Often he felt that he was above them because he was an ninja. Being one of the few ninja left in the world that he was beyond any of them. He had many rivals, he often got into fights as young child. The main person he showed compassion for was his twin brother. He treated his brother as prince making sure he had all he wanted, and fighting anyone who would try to hurt him. Fu is very attached to his younger brother between him and his monkey is his heart. As a child Fu had adopted a baby Golden Lion Tamarin Monkey. His monkey is his best friend in the world. He often talks to his monkey. Unlike monkeys he taught his monkey how to talk. Fu raised the monkey and feel almost like a father figure to his monkey. He treats the monkey as if it was his younger brother .In combat Fu moves quick to protect his monkey and brother willing to give up his own life. Now as the Captain of Squad 2 Fu rules the squad as a dictator anyone who disagrees with his he orders to be killed. Fu has a blood lust to spill the blood of anyone in war innocent or not. He is driving Squad two to become a the leading power of the soul society. Fu sees the zanpaktuos as a key for his squad to obtain more power. He dose mind sacrificing anyone to gain this power. He thinks people other then his brother and monkey are pawns to him. He places value on people lives based on how they can serve him and his purposes. He is very minpulate able to talk his way out of any thing. Despite his ninjutsu skills Fu's uses his illusionary kido for tricky during battle. Fu is a prankster and is often childish. He loves to laugh so often he dose silly stuff to get laughs. Despite his evil side there is a hidden gold. However his hatard for the Arranacar is driving him mad. Fu often likes to play games. The main game he likes to use in battle is hide and go seek or tag. He use these childish games to catch his opponent off guard. He often rages or cries when he dosen't get his way. All of this of course is an act. Fu also loves women. He tends to hit on every woman he meets regard less of their age. He tries to exhort his monkeys cuteness to lure them in.Fu is very complex because he is very goofy, his facial experison are goofy as well. But in combat he is very serious. Fu is a great actor which makes him very manipulate.

Fighting Style

Combat Style Overview

Level 3
—Hakuda
Level 2
—Reiatsu
Level 3
—Zanapakuto
Level 3
—Kido
Level 2

Once Upon A Time

History:
Human Life
In 1871 Brinno was born to Sarah Smith when she was sixteen years old. Sarah's then-boyfriend, Lee Micheal, was in prison at the time, so Sarah gave Brinno up for adoption. Brinno was adopted by the Bolgios family, becoming their only child and son.His new father eventually revealed himself to be a Bounto. His new father was cruel and sadistic. He branded Brinno, as well as physically and sexually abusing him as he grew into a teenager. And teaching him to become a pagan.

When Brinno reached the age of 16, his father finally turned him. Brinno stayed with his father for 5 years, until he had learned all he could from him about the Bountos, and had learned about quinces. He then murdered his master, seeking revenge for the abuses he had suffered at his hands during his slave life. The act got him into serious trouble with the community, so he fled into the wilderness to escape their justice, living feral and alone for months.

Brinno drifted for the next few months,breaking into a rather well-appointed house, Brinno discovered a mountain of food on the dining table, and strangely, drawers full of cash. Helping himself hungrily to both, he was soon surprised by the house's resident, Adele. She seduced the naive teenager to her bed,when she was attacked by a hallow, Brinno was terrified and, grabbing his bag of ill-gotten cash, fled into the night. He moved in with a young woman, Maya. When Brinno was 16, he moved back into his childhood home, even though Maya wanted him to stay with her.

In 1887 Lodon, Brinno is running a brothel as a Pimp. When one of his girls does not return, he enters a room to find her slain in bed. Later, while walking alone at the night, he is attacked in the streets. A Hallow lashes at his throat. As it does, an qunicy swoops in and takes him out, firing an arrow his throat.

As a Pagan taught origins , Brinno possessed a deep love of nature, and believed strongly in the natural laws of the earth, and respect for the power of the elements. As such, he developed an intense disdain for the human race, which he regarded as innately destructive and disrespectful of the environment. In order to counter what he saw as man kind's "race to oblivion" Brinno forged an allegiance with a pack of Bountos, helping luring quinces to their clutches. Angry about the their former comrade they murdered Brinno ending his Human life.

Life as a Shinigami
He soon found himself in Zaraki, which was District 80 of the North Alley of Rukongai. District 80 was the worst, most lawless region of Rukongai, full of thieves and murderers.As he entered the Shin'ō Academy with ease, where he struggled to prove his worth among those from noble families. After many failed attempts at the Shin'ō Academy he often returned to Zaraki. Where he trained to become proficient in swordsmanship, and killed numerous opponents. He soon gave it one more shot at the Academy. Having scored among the highest grades in the entrance exam, Brinno was admitted into the top class.

Four months after entering the Academy, Brinno was pleased that he was going back to the Human World for field training to practice the Konsō for the first time. While he was there he ran away from his group. Where he hide for many years of his life. He soon joined a group of human's with powers. Together they honed their skills for many months. Until a group of Soul reapers tracked him down and murdered the humans, however Brinno escaped. Ever since he had been captured by the killed by the Bounto's as a child, Brinno had been fascinated with armies, and as a Soul reaper, he often followed them on campaign, watching or even taking part in battles or raids for fun, and killing the wounded.

One day there was a clash between two Soul reapers and a Huge Hollow, which killed Both of them. Brinno began to fight the Hollow. When a second Huge Hollow appeared, An Soul reaper Capatin appeared. He helped to block the second Hollow’s attack on him. After defeating the huge hallows Brinno returned to the soul society with the Captain. Where he told all the Captains he was kidnapped by an Bounto. Many of them believed him and allowed him to return to the academy. Brinno graduated from the Shin'ō Academy in its 1,500th year and joined the Gotei 13, where he initially served in the 4th Division. Soon after he was adopted by the Ryōdoji where he changed his name to Inu Ryōdoji.Some time later Fu merged with his Zanpaktuo, Fu killed the Lieutenant of the 6th Division, in a single blow in front of over hundred members of the Division. Fu became the new Lieutenant of that division.

The next 3 months of his new life, Fu and his squad was sent to fight against a large number of Hollows. As Fu's unit battled the Hollows, they began to retreat through a Garganta into Hueco Mundo. Fu and his team followed the Hollows through the Garganta and ended up in the Valley of Screams. Fu and his team did not know where they were and continued fighting the Hollows , but the fighting eventually attracted several Arrancars. The Arrancars attacked and fired Cero blasts, killing several of Fu's comrades. The Arrancars eventually overwhelmed Fu's unit and killed all but Fu. As Fu bravely faced the group of Arracancars alone,he was attacked and fatally wounded. Enraged by his comrade's wound, Fu killed the Arrancars himself. Fu decided to stay in the Valley of Screams and hide from the Soul reapers before they could found out what he done. He soon gained his Bankai while training there.

New Life
At some point, An Espada finds Fu and is impressed by the army of the dead Hollows nearby,and Arrancars. When the Espada asks Fu if the Hollows were killed by him, Fu tells him the Hollows attacked him first. The Espada makes an offer for Fu to join him as an ally, Fu believed the Espada to be strong and agrees to join him.Then Espada and Fu went on a rampage. He became responsible for the death of 53 humans and soul reapers, some of were lieutenants, and proceeded to escape to the Human World. A total of six Bountos were sent to capture him, two of which lost their lives while the remainder were able to kill the Espada however Fu escaped into the world of the living.

When the war in Iraq began after escaping, Fu wandered about until he came across a village under attack by a Hollow.He defeated a hallow but then more appeared. The Hallows becoming too much to handle two Boutnos appeared and helped him. He soon joined them. They went off to serve as Lieutenants in the 28th Louisiana Infantry.They attacked the Qunicies in the army allowing the Bountos to drain them. However the four captains from his past was dispatched to find and execute him. The Bountos was killed, while he was wounded very badly. Fu manged to flee from the Captains. After the battle he found a cabin in which the seductive spirit aware human posed as a widow and gave him food and shelter. When she began to make sexual advances toward Fu, he summits and has inter course with her and spend many of next years living with her. One day he after making love with her he left out to go training, she had been killed by a Arranacar. The trauma of the event reverted Fu into a new self when he looked into the mirror and he forgot what had occurred, blaming it on Hollows. He soon lost his memory of his prior years of his life.He became a wandering Shinigami with the aim of personally eradicating all the Hollows in existence, especially the one who killed his lover, in retribution for what had occurred. He only remembers himself as Fu shinkō his new name.Tormented by his past in nightmares he begins to search for who he once was. He often is tormented by back flashes as well.

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Hello, I shall be the Moderator servicing you today. While this application meets the quantity standards asked for from the template, there are numerous logical inconsistencies and I'm afraid the content is just not an acceptable quality for a Lieutenant/Second Seat Position.

Fu wrote:: 178 years old

Fu wrote:: 1871

If the character was actually 178 years old, and born in 1871: Then the current year is 2049.

Which, as far as I know, it is not. Instead, it is close to if not actually 2014. So, for your character to be 178 years old, he would have to be born in 1836.

Not a deal breaker. Remember to be more consistent with your math.

No birthdate? Unacceptable. Just put down something. Anything'll do, but absolutely no blanks.

Your appearance was developing nicely with a nice mix of physical details and traits to present a good mental image. But then

Fu wrote:: In both of his ears are ear rings with the squad's two symbol's crest.

Why squad two, now?

The rest of the appearance is fine, although the details about armor come with the caveat that you do not confer any tactical or statistical advantages from them. If you do, please remove their mention and consult another staffer on how to register them properly.

Personality was ... a bit of a dry read, I'm afraid. Please try to vary your sentence structure so it doesn't feel like I'm reading a massive checklist with each item beginning with "He is/present-tense verb"

Fu wrote:: He occasionally speaks in an ancient Celt or Gaul language, denoting his origins.

I broke off and pondered the implications of this. You have a Greek tattoo, Chinese armor, and now can speak an ancient language. I'm sorry, but the detail seems superfluous. Back to the app proper.

Fu wrote:: He is a peerless womanizer.

I lost it here.

Your personality is very dull, and a massive checklist of qualities and fail to actually give me any sense of who the character actually 'is', rather than just a massive list of traits and things he would 'do.'

But, we're not done. On to the second the second paragraph!

Family relations is a good topic to touch on, but not in this checksumlist format you have going, I'm afraid. Trying varying it a little.

Fu wrote:: As a child Fu had adopted a baby Golden Lion Tamarin Monkey. His monkey is his best friend in the world. He often talks to his monkey. Unlike monkeys he taught his monkey how to talk. Fu raised the monkey and feel almost like a father figure to his monkey. He treats the monkey as if it was his younger brother .In combat Fu moves quick to protect his monkey and brother willing to give up his own life.

What. Is this the same ruthless character from earlier? The moral nihilist who hates humans, and thinks himself superior? Last I check, being an asshole doesn't grant one the magic powers to make make a monkey TALK.

Fu wrote:: Now as the Captain of Squad 2 Fu rules the squad as a dictator anyone who disagrees with his he orders to be killed.

I see what's going on here. It seems your personality paragraph 2 is for an entirely different character. You might want to delete it, considering it's confusing as hell, it's not very entertaining to read, some of it doesn't make sense, and I think the current Division 2 Captain is going to be very cross with you.

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Your fighting styles unfortunately, will not be possible for the rank you're aiming for (6th Division Lieutenant - Semi-Elite). Semi-Elites will begin with 2500 EXP to distribute. Three Level 3s and two Level 2s will cost 2100 + 1000 = 3100. This is over the limit. By 600 points.

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I'm sorry, your history has far too many inaccuracies that it is unacceptable for a Lieutenant Rank. For starters, inclusion of the Bounts, who were filler villains and for all intents and purposes are non-canon. Please remove any mention of them in this history, and their connection to your character.

The time inconsistency also applies here, please remember to address that. Also running a brothel in 1836 London as a sixteen year old hits on the 'very improbable' scale of improbability. Either up the age, or discard that detail.

Also, the explanation (even if Bounts were canon) of his death is completely confusing due to pronoun confusion, please be more clear which group killed him and why.

This forum is also a complete AU forum, the Shin'ō Academy does not exist. In fact, the Gotei itself is relatively newly formed, please keep this in mind and be sure to read the Shinigami race information topic here: https://soulpurify.forumotion.com/t10-shinigami-information

The Espadas also do not exist as we know them, and it's once again highly improbable for an Espada to have had such a role in your past without it being absurd, and you not being annihilated as well. Also Bounts. Bounts are bad.

In conclusion, your application is not suited for the rank you are attempting to apply for. Additionally, an earlier application for that rank was written prior to yours, and pending review, as well as been approved. This means the 6th Division Lt. Rank is no longer open.

However, 3rd Seat Ranks on this forum qualify as 'Semi-Elite' and there are still a couple Lt and multiple 3rd seat positions open.